Here are a few of the of the poems i wrote, i hope u like them but i think they are a little cheesy(im only 14

"beautiful is what you are, your beauty shines from a-far,


when i look into your face,


its like you dont belong with the human race,


it looks like your an angel,


a painting of God's grace,


and when i look into your face,


i see the true meaning of beauty and grace."





i look in your eyes and you hold my gaze


i behold your beauty and i'm truly amazed


i didn't think it was possible but i guess its true


i didn't think anyone could look as good as you do


beauty is only skin deep and your soul is so pure


you have a wonderful personality of that i am sure


you smile and cry and not afraid to show emotion


you have a wonderful laugh heard above any commotion


we're like cookies and milk just us two


(((lovers name here))) i love you





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Here are a few of the of the poems i wrote, i hope u like them but i think they are a little cheesy(im only 14
Must say u'r outlook is fatastic!!! And u sure did make my day.


But u know what?? How can one give out sad things to others, I have always poured out the good things that I had to others but my blues, whom will I give save 1, and that too I've to b careful, coz no one like to share the blues. everybody loves to soak in the sunshine.
Reply:Becaus you are young, I'll be gentle,. This is not the poetry section. This is the philosophy section.
Reply:Let out a final gasp of hope


Into a darling grey world


There it goes.





Doubt it if they'll even know


It's gone.
Reply:Aww, there Heaps Way Mega Good =))
Reply:i dont like it i love it. your great!!
Reply:I love the way you think. I know this is not the poetry section, but are a young philosopher. Some girl will be lucky to get you one day!!