A love poem...(please read)?

Now that I have your attention, let me tell you that this is not a love poem. For those of you with simple minds, click back now.





Does it really hurt you to think about these kind of things people? Now, lets try this again. And let me hear what you have to say people! What good does it do anyone to stay quiet? 5.. 4.. 3.. 2.. 1.. GO!





Patriot





Please tie my hands together


Before you leave me alone.


I fear what they might do.


I've given up on you.


I want a permanent solution


For our temporary problems.


But one man alone


Cannot spread the word.


If you can hear the message


That I'm providing you,


Then stand up,


Spread it like a fire,


And truly make a difference.





I do not want to be a part of humanity


If humanity is like this.


Who cares? I do.


Hearings in D.C.


Over steroid use?


It's ok, I understand


The importance of the matter


Let the people of our country


Live in ignorance.


America the beautiful?


Beauty is only skin deep.

A love poem...(please read)?
OH "" Hey now, you got that right! Yes I do believe there are Thousands of people who are feeling LOTS of those same feelings. You are not alone%26lt;!!!!!
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Reply:thought-provoking, liked this part:


America is beautiful?


Beauty is only skin deep!
Reply:I guess I got a simple mind or your so arrogant you think you actually wrote something.


"Please tie my hands together ....." Now that was okay for a love lost.


The second stanza went somewhere else.


Poetry is about imagery, what was I supposed to see?





Simple minds do appreciate poetry.
Reply:it is a whinge.





you are a really sad person.
Reply:cool poem you can win a million competitions
Reply:i like it. is it all 1,cuz i like the first 1. after details u lost me...is it suppose to be 1?
Reply:No, it does not hurt to think about the points you raise. I personally did not like the ********* exhibited in your intro as it distracts from the strong message you eloquently conveyed. Perhaps, unless you are totally frustrated, disillusioned, impatient, impertinent, or don't give a damn, next time let your words speak for themselves. Those who understand will, those who do not will tell you how wonderful you are anyway. That's part of the "beauty" of America.
Reply:TY for posting. Certainly a style and context I am into.





I've traveled and seen the "back side" of this country, and find it "dirty"





Kudos.





Steven Wolf
Reply:i like it i dont understand how others dont get it ohh well thats their problem=]