Monday, November 21, 2011

Poem, please let me know your thoughts? Thanks.?

Rays of light shine of a summer's morning rise.


Through my bedroom window you sneak in


and wake me with the a.m’s glow.


As a thief you steal me from deep sleep,


caressing warmth skin deep.


Embracing fine white fibers upon this bed


and on my head, a kiss you lay.





Igniting the day, warming my soul


I welcome your warmness.


Will pardon you of a dream you stole.


As you will forgive the creeping night


taking your light.


Rays of light shine of a night's starlight.

Poem, please let me know your thoughts? Thanks.?
OMG....I LOVE THIS POEM, itis like soo imaginative, it makes u picture the word in ur mind and then make u imagine it's happening, like a real life time....keep it up, try to explain more details i think tht would be more nice.... good luck :))
Reply:Good.
Reply:Actually, the poem is nice.


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