Rays of light shine of a summer's morning rise.
Through my bedroom window you sneak in
and wake me with the a.m’s glow.
As a thief you steal me from deep sleep,
caressing warmth skin deep.
Embracing fine white fibers upon this bed
and on my head, a kiss you lay.
Igniting the day, warming my soul
I welcome your warmness.
Will pardon you of a dream you stole.
As you will forgive the creeping night
taking your light.
Rays of light shine of a night's starlight.
Poem, please let me know your thoughts? Thanks.?
OMG....I LOVE THIS POEM, itis like soo imaginative, it makes u picture the word in ur mind and then make u imagine it's happening, like a real life time....keep it up, try to explain more details i think tht would be more nice.... good luck :))
Reply:Good.
Reply:Actually, the poem is nice.
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