What do you think about this poem?

What am I to you


do you hunger for me with your heart and soul


Do you need me to complete your world


What am I to you


My world is filled with you ,the heat of you


You are under my skin ,I can feel you within.


We are apart but you are always in my heart my head


my very soul,


Under my skin deep within.


My blood is rich with the taste of you


What am I to you

What do you think about this poem?
yes heart,body and soul yearns for you
Reply:I enjoyed this one. I'm so proud and admire your creativity. Keep it up. Don't forget your friends when you become famous. Report It

Reply:Very cool. I'm a poet myself. Your poem is filled with emotion. Great one!
Reply:Yes its very good, its amazing. im not much of a poemist but maybe u jus inspired me,
Reply:really nice. i like the emotion
Reply:I really liked "My blood is rich with the taste of you"





Nice line.
Reply:It is OK.





According to me, you are less than 20 years. And you are looking for the person you want to love, but you have not found him.





I think the extension of the poem is good. You give the message clearly.
Reply:i like it repetitiveness and retorichal questions gdgd i love it xx

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